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Classtache, April 14th, 2016, 8:02 pm ( Reply )

I am definitely overthinking...
This page took a while longer than I expected. I really like Riley's development I'm just worried that it's too rushed. Even though it's been over thirty pages and he's rarely gotten outta character, Y'know as a pushover. I think Riley has one of the cutest personalities and I want the other two ukes to be just as cute but different also.

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DianaJones, April 14th, 2016, 8:34 pm ( Reply )



I think Riley's development works here because the situation is extreme and obviously different from what Riley is actually used to. We all do unexpected things when forced into unexpected scenarios. Riley standing up to the guy when he was in his own home set the... precedent? It was unexpected of him to do so then, but also understandable, given that they were in Riley's home, Riley wasn't alone, and once his adrenaline wore down, he was back to 'normal'. The fact that his ire would rise to a certain person and make him do things he 'normally' wouldn't is very believable, and the fact that he's going about a more indirect way, instead of confronting him directly, makes it all the more believable. It's actually a pretty great trope, that the smaller guy uses his brains, and it's back up by evidence from earlier, when he took one of Riley's sweets and then slammed a door in his face, and Riley will use that weakness against him. I think you have a good enough grasp on these characters that it'd be pretty difficult for you to mess up, and you're doing great.

Scorpio730, April 14th, 2016, 10:19 pm ( Reply )



Everyone has a boiling point, after all. This actually looks in character to me; Riley isn't so much confrontational as defensively proactive. I keep thinking of a tiger annoying a viper.

HoboDolan, April 16th, 2016, 10:41 am ( Reply )



Looks like someone is going so be angryyy.
I must add that the last panel is so adorable it makes me smile myself. (Isn't suspicious he is so happy about it?)

raikua, April 19th, 2016, 2:25 pm ( Reply )



Nah, I don't think it's rushed at all. They declared War and now he's bringing out the cupcake guns. >:D

Liv3lafLuv (Guest), January 3rd, 2017, 2:19 am ( Reply )



OMG! Like in the IRON GIANT!! O.O Riley and I are officially besties. *squeals*

justw894, January 14th, 2017, 12:31 am ( Reply )


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